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Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my complete satisfaction with how well the instructors taught and the course itself was structured, 'Cook in 10 minutes'. As I am an amateur cook course not only provided an expert level perception on how to cook simple dishes but also explained them by hands-on practical. Futhermore, despite the numerous recipes to experiment with, the best aspect of the course was on how to present the food that would draw the attention of the consumer. As a result of this outstanding course. I have developed a keen interest in cooking and thereby I have been making food items for my friends and family. I even went as far as to completely prepare all the dishes for an English breakfast. For me to explore as much as I can in the cooking world, it will be greatly appreciated if your school can provide another subject that caters towards an international cuisine. This will allow me to comprehend the cultural difference of few places by learning about their food. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Misri.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my complete satisfaction with how well the instructors taught and the
course
itself
was structured
, 'Cook in 10 minutes'. As I am an amateur cook
course
not
only
provided an expert level perception on how to cook simple dishes
but
also
explained
them by hands-on practical.
Futhermore
, despite the numerous recipes to experiment with, the best aspect of the
course
was on how to present the food that would draw the attention of the consumer.
As
a result of this outstanding
course
. I have developed a keen interest in cooking and thereby I have been making food items for my friends and family. I even went as far as to completely prepare all the dishes for an English breakfast. For me to explore as much as I can in the cooking world, it will be
greatly
appreciated if your school can provide another subject that caters towards an international cuisine. This will
allow
me to comprehend the cultural difference of few places by learning about their food.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
,
Misri
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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