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Dear Dave, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace.

Dear Dave, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace. I heard from Tracy that you appeared for an interview at American bank, which is without a doubt the best place to work. However, I was curious to know more about job description, especially your roles and responsibilities. As well as, what are the future prospect of the role? I’m sure you must have carried your own research before applying for the position but I want to know how closely it is relatable to your current job. As you know, interviewee only get about an hour to impress interviewer and land a job. It is quite essential to utilize this time effectively to showcase your strong abilities and how that would be useful for their organization. I would advise to practicing the whole process by yourself before appearing for real one. Perhaps, we could discuss this in more detail in person. How about we hang out together and continue this discussion before an interview? I’m completely free on Friday and Saturday afternoon. Please let me know when you want have meeting. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Sandip
Dear Dave,

How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in
good
health and mental peace. I heard from Tracy that you appeared for an interview at American bank, which is without a doubt the best place to work.

However
, I was curious to
know
more about job description,
especially
your roles and responsibilities.
As well
as, what are the future prospect of the role? I’m sure you
must
have carried your
own
research
before
applying for the position
but
I want to
know
how
closely
it is relatable to your
current
job.

As you
know
, interviewee
only
get
about an hour to impress interviewer and land a job. It is quite essential to utilize this time
effectively
to showcase your strong abilities and how that would be useful for their organization. I would advise to
practicing
the whole process by yourself
before
appearing for real one.

Perhaps, we could discuss this in more detail in person. How about we hang out together and continue this discussion
before
an interview? I’m completely free on Friday and Saturday afternoon.
Please
let
me
know
when you
want have
meeting.

I hope to hear from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Sandip
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IELTS letter Dear Dave, How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you in good health and mental peace.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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