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Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, Recently, I have taken a short cookery course at your renowned institute, and I am writing this letter to express how much happy I am about the course, which I attended about a month ago, in an effort to enhance my culinary arts skills. I must admit that even though the course was taught intensively for a good period of four weeks, I felt like the time had passed rather quickly since I enjoyed the course so much. By the way, the best thing about the course was that it comprehensively taught me about the arts of making some Italian and oriental desserts quickly and easily. Besides, I enjoyed learning about the tricks of chopping meats so nicely. Anyway, after finishing the cookery course, I used some of my cooking skills to prepare some delicious desserts for the birthday party of one of my close friends in addition to preparing some of my favourite dishes for my family. Before ending here, I would also like to request you to introduce a short course at your institute on preparing desserts by using different kinds of tropical fruits and vegetables. Thank you once again for conducting such a useful course. Yours faithfully, Andre Dmitry
Dear Sir or Madam,

Recently, I have taken a short cookery
course
at your renowned institute, and I am writing this letter to express how much happy I am about the
course
, which I attended about a month ago, in an effort to enhance my culinary arts
skills
.

I
must
admit that
even though
the
course
was taught
intensively
for a
good
period of four weeks, I felt like the time had passed
rather
quickly
since I enjoyed the
course
so
much. By the way, the best thing about the
course
was that it
comprehensively
taught me about the arts of making
some
Italian and oriental desserts
quickly
and
easily
.
Besides
, I enjoyed learning about the tricks of chopping meats
so
nicely
.

Anyway, after finishing the cookery
course
, I
used
some
of my cooking
skills
to prepare
some
delicious desserts for the birthday party of one of my close friends
in addition
to preparing
some
of my
favourite
dishes for my family.
Before
ending here, I would
also
like to request you to introduce a short
course
at your institute on preparing desserts by using
different
kinds of tropical fruits and vegetables.

Thank you once again for conducting such a useful course.

Yours
faithfully
,

Andre Dmitry
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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