Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a part-time job in your museum shop during the holiday. I am very keen to have a part-time job during this summer vacation, specifically in a shop where I would be able to learn and meet people from diverse backgrounds. I am hoping that you would consider my application and give me the chance to work for you.
I am a teacher in an elementary grammar school and I teach history. I am 26 years old and have completed my graduation from arts major. I can speak English, Sinhala and Tamil fluently. Last year, I worked in a large bookshop during my vacation and enjoyed it very much. I would like to meet new people and serve my position with dedication, commitment and hard work.
I enjoyed going to your museum a few months ago and I spent a considerable amount of time there. I visited your museum shop with a team and I am familiar with the types of items your store sells to visitors. I think you will be kind enough to consider me as a suitable candidate for this position.
I look forward to hearing from you soon and further discuss my candidacy for the job.
Yours faithfully,
Ama Nikole
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a part-time job in your museum shop during the holiday. I am
very
keen to have a part-time job during this summer vacation,
specifically
in a shop where I would be able to learn and
meet
people
from diverse backgrounds.
I
am hoping that you would consider my application and give me the chance to work for you.
I
am a teacher in an elementary grammar school and I teach history.
I
am 26 years
old
and have completed my graduation from arts major.
I
can speak English,
Sinhala
and Tamil
fluently
. Last year, I worked in a large bookshop during my vacation and enjoyed it
very
much. I would like to
meet
new
people
and serve my position with dedication, commitment and
hard
work.
I enjoyed going to your museum a few months ago and I spent a considerable amount of time there.
I
visited your museum shop with a
team and
I am familiar with the types of items your store sells to visitors.
I
think
you will be kind
enough
to consider me as a suitable candidate for this position.
I
look forward to hearing from you
soon
and
further
discuss my candidacy for the job.
Yours
faithfully
,
Ama
Nikole
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