Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently noticed a job advertisement in a local newspaper for the sales executive position in the City Museum shop. I would like to apply for the post as a part-time employee during the summer holiday. I am hoping that you would consider my candidacy for the post and give me a chance to discuss it further in a formal interview.
I have completed my graduation in accounting and have sound knowledge of customer care. Besides, I have two years of experience as a front desk officer in a telecom company. As I will be free during the summer vacation, I would like to work for your museum shop that primarily sells antique items, books, journals and souvenirs. I am quite confident that I would be a valuable asset to your team.
The reason for applying this position is to work in a post which is equally challenging and rewarding. At the same time, I will be able to meet people from diverse cultures and regions. This would definitely make my holidays meaningful and exciting.
I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shanthy Devi
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently noticed a job advertisement in a local newspaper for the sales executive position in the City Museum shop. I would like to apply for the post as a part-time employee during the summer holiday.
I
am hoping that you would consider my candidacy for the post and give me a chance to discuss it
further
in a formal interview.
I
have completed my graduation in accounting and have sound knowledge of customer care.
Besides
, I have two years of experience as a front desk officer in a telecom
company
. As I will be free during the summer vacation, I would like to work for your museum shop that
primarily
sells antique items, books, journals and souvenirs. I am quite confident that I would be a valuable asset to your team.
The reason for applying this position is to work in a post which is
equally
challenging and rewarding. At the same time, I will be able to
meet
people
from diverse cultures and regions. This would definitely
make
my holidays meaningful and exciting.
I look forward to meeting you
soon
.
Yours
faithfully
,
Shanthy
Devi
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