Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the part-time job at your City Museum shop in response to a job advert that was published in the Daily Observer on 27th March 2020. I am a third-year student at Lincon College and my major is history. We are currently on our summer break and I am hoping to gain some valuable work experience and would like to discuss my possible employment opportunity in your museum shop.
Our college has declared a summer holiday from 1st June to 30th March 2020. I will be free during these days and would be able to work full-time or part-time as per your requirement.
I worked in a local history Museum in my hometown for eight months in early 2018. In addition to that, I am quite good with computers and numbers. I believe I would be a great asset to your business.
I am passionate about history and museums since my childhood. There is no Museum in this city that I haven't been to. I love your Museum as it has a wide variety of historical objects and abundant audio-visual library. I know how important the shop is in terms of selling antiques and collector's items to the visitors. I am positive that I can boost your sells.
I believe that my enthusiasm for history and museum and relevant skills will make me a good candidate for this position. I am ready to discuss further in a formal interview at any time.
Yours faithfully,
Sandeep Parekh
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the part-time job at your City
Museum
shop in response to a job advert that
was published
in the Daily Observer on 27th March 2020. I am a third-year student at
Lincon
College and my major is
history
. We are
currently
on our summer
break and
I am hoping to gain
some
valuable work experience and would like to discuss my possible employment opportunity in your
museum
shop.
Our college has declared a summer holiday from 1st June to 30th March 2020. I will be free during these days and would be able to work full-time or part-time as per your requirement.
I worked in a local
history
Museum
in my hometown for eight months in early 2018.
In addition
to that, I am quite
good
with computers and numbers. I believe I would be a great asset to your business.
I am passionate about
history
and
museums
since my childhood. There is no
Museum
in this city that I haven't been to. I
love
your
Museum
as it has a wide variety of historical objects and abundant audio-visual library. I know how
important
the shop is in terms of selling antiques and collector's items to the visitors.
I
am
positive
that I can boost your sells.
I
believe that my enthusiasm for
history
and
museum
and relevant
skills
will
make
me a
good
candidate for this position.
I
am ready to discuss
further
in a formal interview at any time.
Yours
faithfully
,
Sandeep
Parekh
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