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you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with the family for six months and look after their six-year-old-child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why youwould like the job, give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ, say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is John and I am writing to you regarding your recent advertisement for child-care help in the "Australian Weekly" magazine. I am keen to apply to this opportunity and deem myself a good fit for the job. I do love children and spend most of my time taking care of them, being a kindergarten teacher. I enjoy their company and learn new things through their ideas. As aforementioned, my background in children's education coupled with professional certifications in first-aid and health care, equips me to handle situations in a timely and careful manner. In short, your child is in good hands. As I understand, the work is 5 days per week which is also ideal for me in terms of fulfilling my wanderlust nature. I enjoy Australian wines, which not only encourages me to understand the art of wine making but also fuels my search for new and exotic tastes. If you think myself to be a good match for your needs, please let me know. Yours Sincerely, John
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
John and
I am writing to you regarding your recent advertisement for child-care
help
in the
"
Australian Weekly
"
magazine. I am keen to apply to this opportunity and deem myself a
good
fit for the job.

I do
love
children and spend most of my time taking care of them, being a kindergarten teacher.
I
enjoy their
company
and learn new things through their
ideas
.

As aforementioned, my background in children's education coupled with professional certifications in
first
-aid and health care, equips me to handle situations in a timely and careful manner. In short, your child is in
good
hands.

As I understand, the work is 5 days per week which is
also
ideal for me in terms of fulfilling my wanderlust nature. I enjoy Australian wines, which not
only
encourages me to understand the art of wine making
but
also
fuels my search for new and exotic tastes.

If you
think
myself to be a
good
match for your needs,
please
let
me know.

Yours
Sincerely
, John
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IELTS letter you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with the family for six months and look after their six-year-old-child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why youwould like the job, give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ, say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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