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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing to you requesting permission to take some time off to complete my ACCA qualification. I will be needing the next month off as my exam is on the 1st of April 2021 and it is very intensive. The month off will help me focus and give my best in completing the qualification. Once I am back to work, I will be able to apply most of the knowledge I have gained through studying for the course. I believe it will help me with my duties on the job and will provide me the skills to become more efficient. As I am currently working as a junior audit consultant, this qualification will help me master the accounting and business side required by most of our clients. I believe it will also enhance my creative thinking by coming up with better ideas that can improve the way we work in the company. I hope you accept my request. Thanking you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Pam David
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you requesting permission to take
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some
time off to complete my
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ACCA
qualification.

I will be needing the
next
month off as my exam is on the 1st of April
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2021 and
it is
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very
intensive. The month off will
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help
me focus and give my best in completing the qualification.

Once I am back to work, I will be able to apply most of the knowledge I have gained through studying for the course. I believe it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me with my duties on the job and will provide me the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to become more efficient.

As I am
currently
working as a junior audit consultant, this qualification will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me master the accounting and business side required by most of our clients. I believe it will
also
enhance my creative thinking by coming up with better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the way we work in the
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company
.

I hope you accept my request.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Pam David

IELTS letter You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.