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write a letter to your friend telling about the first prize you have won in photography competition. Tell how you feel. Explain how did you get the prize. An exhibition will be held, invite your friend to attend it.

Dear Rohit, Hope you are doing good. It has been long time since we spoke. Today I am writing to share a good news to you. Last Sunday I attended a photography competition in our community club, It was tough and interesting event. I displayed all my masterpieces of clicks those I took from the sea shore and forest areas of my city. The moment the winners were announced, I was extremely cheerful as soon as my name was announced as winner first position in this competition. This was one of my most happy moment of mine, as photography is my passion. In this event, all photos were arranged in gallery with the name of photographer and tagline with short description about theme. Senior professor from the local art college was the judge of this competition. He evaluated the photographs based on presentation approach, and the light effects. As per narrative from judge, I was selected winner based on my theme of my photography, as this was based on wildlife, and the snaps were of rare migratory birds with extra zoom effects. After the judgement of the photographs, all participants were called upon the stage to share their experiences. Thereafter judge felicitated me with a gold medal as first prize. I am sure you will be excited to learn that, next month there will be National art exhibition in our city center, and this is going to be organized by our photography council. I would like to invite you for the same and I am sure you will love this event. Please plan your trip. Looking forward hearing from you, Take Care, Kriti
Dear Rohit,

Hope you are doing
good
. It has been long time since we spoke.
Today
I am writing to share a
good
news to you.

Last Sunday I attended a photography competition in our community club, It was tough and interesting
event
. I displayed all my masterpieces of clicks those I took from the sea shore and forest areas of my city. The moment the winners
were announced
, I was
extremely
cheerful as
soon
as my name
was announced
as winner
first
position in this competition. This was one of my most happy moment of mine, as photography is my passion.

In this
event
, all photos
were arranged
in gallery with the name of photographer and tagline with short description about theme. Senior professor from the local art college was the judge of this competition. He evaluated the photographs based on presentation approach, and the light effects. As per narrative from judge, I
was selected
winner based on my theme of my photography, as this
was based
on wildlife, and the snaps were of rare migratory birds with extra zoom effects. After the judgement of the photographs, all participants
were called
upon the stage to share their experiences.
Thereafter
judge felicitated me with a gold medal as
first
prize.

I am sure you will
be excited
to learn that,
next
month there will be National art exhibition in our city center, and this is going to
be organized
by our photography council. I would like to invite you for the
same and
I am sure you will
love
this
event
.
Please
plan your trip.

Looking forward hearing from you,

Take Care,

Kriti
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend telling about the first prize you have won in photography competition. Tell how you feel. Explain how did you get the prize. An exhibition will be held, invite your friend to attend it.

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