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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with some of the household furniture provided. To begin, my name is Stephin Saj and I am the resident of house 3A. I along with my family have been living in this aboard for the last 3 months. For the most part, I am fully satisfied with your services. However, in the last week, I found some issues with the chairs provided. On some chairs, the nuts and bolts were missing and, some of the chair's legs are in a way that it will break any time. My kids usually play around these chairs all the time. So if it is broken, it can cause serious injuries to them, I would recommend you to do the necessary repairs as soon as possible. I would appreciate it if you could replace them. I will be available this weekend so that please send your labours to fix it. I look forward to your response, Yours faithfully, Stephin Saj
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with
some of the
household furniture provided.

To
begin
, my name is
Stephin
Saj and
I am the resident of
house
3A. I along with my family have been living in this aboard for the last 3 months.
For the most part
, I am
fully
satisfied with your services.

However
, in the last week, I found
some
issues with the chairs provided. On
some
chairs, the nuts and bolts were missing and,
some
of the chair's legs are in a way that it will break any time. My kids
usually
play around these chairs all the time.
So
if it
is broken
, it can cause serious injuries to them,

I would recommend you to do the necessary repairs as
soon
as possible. I would appreciate it if you could replace them.
I
will be available this weekend
so
that
please
send
your
labours
to
fix
it.

I
look forward to your response,

Yours
faithfully
,

Stephin
Saj
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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