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Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Jhon, I am Shubham Sharma, leaving on rent at your premises ( Groz Beckett Society ) and I am writing this letter to inform you that I and my family are facing out some issues regarding the furniture in here. Firstly, I would really like to say that you have a beautiful house with an amazing landscape view. My parents usually talk to me about the view, they really enjoy a cup of coffee sitting on the balcony and looking at the scenery. Coming back to the point actually, furniture e. g. the bed and the chairs of dining table are troubling us with a lot of noise and some of the chairs have lost their balance as well. I would really appreciate it if you help us to solve this out. As you know my parents are old enough to get this repaired and I use to work miles away from the house I use to reach late at home at that time I am unable to find resources. I request you again to fix the furniture at home as quickly as possible. Thank you, Shubham Sharma

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some
 issues regarding the furniture in here. Firstly
, I would really
 like to say that you have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 with an amazing landscape view. My parents usually
 talk to me about the view, they really
 enjoy a cup of coffee sitting on the balcony and looking at the scenery. Coming back to the point actually, furniture There should be no space here: “e.g.”.e.g.
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a lot of
 noise and If the text is a generality, ‘of the’ is not necessary.some
some of the
 chairs have lost their balance as well
. I would really
 appreciate it if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us to solve this out. As you know my parents are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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enough
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get
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repaired and
 I Make sure that ‘use to’ is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean ‘accustomed to’, use “used to”.used to
use to
 work miles away from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 I Make sure that ‘use to’ is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean ‘accustomed to’, use “used to”.used to
use to
 reach late at home at that time I am unable to find resources. I request you again to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the furniture at home as quickly
 as possible.

Thank you,

Shubham Sharma