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Task 1 Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans. • describe the interesting places you plan to visit. • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Dear Harleen, Through this letter, I would like to inform you that I am planing to come to Canada for my summer vacations. I hope you are diong well. As youn know, I am currently pursuing my post-graduation in computer science and I have holidays for 2 months from 1st May to 31st of July. I am very excited to tell you that I am coming to Tronto for a month. I will reach there on 15th May and stay there for 20 days. Afterthat, I will spend some time with my cusion Simran in Montreal. Moreover, I searched many places to visit in Tronto like CN tower, Niagra fall and plethora of other tourest attrections from sreach engine. You have been living in Canada since five years, you would surely know various other option for sightseeing. Please suggest me those one also. Well, I am so excited to meet you as well as explore the new world. Looking forward to hear from you, With regards,
Dear
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Harleen
,

Through this letter, I would like to inform you that I am planing to
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come
to Canada for my summer vacations.

I hope you are
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diong
well. As
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youn
know, I am
currently
pursuing my post-graduation in computer science and I have holidays for 2 months from 1st May to 31st of July. I am
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very
excited to
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tell
you that I am coming to
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Tronto
for a month. I will reach there on 15th May and stay there for 20 days.
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Afterthat
, I will spend
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some
time with my
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cusion
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Simran
in Montreal.

Moreover
, I searched
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many
places to visit in
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Tronto
like
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CN tower
,
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Niagra
fall and plethora of other
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tourest
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attrections
from
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sreach
engine. You have been living in Canada since five years, you would
surely
know various other option for sightseeing.
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Please
suggest me those one
also
. Well, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
as well
as explore the new world.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to hearing”.
to hear
from you,

With regards,

IELTS letter Task 1 Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans. • describe the interesting places you plan to visit. • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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