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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child g5ypd

Dear Sir or Madam, With reference to your advertisement in The Week magazine, Australian Edition, I would like to apply for the said position. I always loved to be around kids because of which I started doing part time job of babysitting. That also helped me support my studies in college. Because I liked being a babysitter, it helped me decide on my career prospect and I enrolled for Diploma in Child Care from DNU University, New Zealand. I had passed the course with Distinction in 2018. Also to mention, I had completed my apprenticeship in Joy Children’s Hospital, New Zealand in the same year. I can assure you that given a chance to serve, you would have no complaints from me. I have never visited Australia, so during free time, I would love to explore the tourist places, learn about its culture and pass the learned things to your child. Further, for your consideration, I am enclosing herewith my Curriculum Vitae. In case you have any questions or need clarity about my experience, you can reach out to me on 99999 00000 or on my e-mail id abc@xyz. com. Looking forward for a favourable response from your end. Thanking you, Yours sincerely, Ms. ABC

Dear Sir or Madam,

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love
 to explore the tourist places, learn about its culture and pass the learned things to your child.

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 response from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely
,

Ms. ABC