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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia WQDK
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the position of caretaker of a child at your home in Sydney, Australia, as advertised in the one of the prestigious magazines. My name is Lucy and I love to take care of children and play with them. Moreover, this job opportunity is in my hometown which makes convenient for me to travel to your place. This is one of the reasons why I would like to get this position. I have 10 years of experience in this field, and I have worked in many day-care schools as well as for a few residents in my town. My skills include classroom management and preparing special nutritious food which is required for kids’ development. In addition, I pay close attention to a child’s selected activities so that they can learn significantly from educational toys and other undertakings. It is my knowledge and experience which sets me apart from other candidates. I would like to spend my leisure time with children because it would be part of my job and daily routine. Furthermore, I like to be involved in different pursuits like travelling, swimming, and other activities which can keep me fit. I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the position of caretaker of a child at your home in Sydney, Australia, as advertised in the one of the prestigious magazines.

My name is Lucy and I
love
to take care of children and play with them.
Moreover
, this job opportunity is in my hometown which
makes
convenient for me to travel to your place. This is one of the reasons why I would like to
get
this position.

I have 10 years of experience in this field, and I have worked in
many
day-care schools
as well
as for a few residents in my town. My
skills
include classroom management and preparing special nutritious food which
is required
for kids’ development.
In addition
, I pay close attention to a child’s selected activities
so
that they can learn
significantly
from educational toys and other undertakings. It is my knowledge and experience which sets me apart from other candidates.

I would like to spend my leisure time with children
because
it would be part of my job and daily routine.
Furthermore
, I like to
be involved
in
different
pursuits like travelling, swimming, and other activities which can
keep
me fit.

I would be grateful if you could respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
216 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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