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Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet.

Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet. KK93
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter regarding my absence from the meeting set to discuss the poor performance of my kid in the recent held exam. Let me explain my situation, On very same day of our meet up I had to present seminar for our management as it was all about showing them our future goals, growth, new products launch in coming years moreover I am also expecting a promotion so this event was very important for personal the growth. I hope you understand the whole situation. In the mean time I am also trying to find the weakness and loose ends in my son studies. During studies now more focus is on visual examples and practice test so the he can apply them easily in exams, also visual aid help to understand clearly and remember for longer time. we can have meet any day in the second week. you can fill e in with the date and time via my telephone no. 9796554433. Once again i apologize for absence. looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter regarding my absence from the meeting set to discuss the poor performance of my kid in the recent held exam.

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any day in the second week.
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Yours
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IELTS letter Your child's teacher has requested a meeting with you this Friday to discuss your child's low test scores. Unfortunately, you cannot attend. Write a letter to your child's teacher. In your letter Describe why you cannot attend the meeting Explain how you have been helping your child study Propose another time to meet.

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180 words
6.0
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