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You have an evening class and your teacher gave you an essay to work on for the weekend. However, you were not able to finish the essay. Write a letter saying the following: - outline the subject of your essay - what happened - why you did not finish it - say what you will do to finish it.

You have an evening class and your teacher gave you an essay to work on for the weekend. However, you were not able to finish the essay. Write a letter saying the following: - outline the subject of your essay - what happened - why you did not finish it - say what you will do to finish it. d0EX
Dear David, I’m very thrilled to hear about your new business. It would be my pleasure to give you some recommendations on the merchandise you might consider buying from Iran. I remember you always liked my traditional rice recipe with the unique spice called “Saffron”. I know that numerous Iranian people are residing in Canada. Since this spice is widely used in our cuisine, I’m sure it will always be in high demand. You might figure out that you can buy this product online with a little internet browsing; However, I do not recommend this method. Online retailers usually sell low-quality and over-priced products. Here is an idea; if you wish, I can communicate with local farmers here in Iran. This way, by negotiating with the first-hand seller, the price would be reasonable, and you might even be able to have your brand printed on the packaging. My uncle, who lives in Canada, tends to buy a dozen Saffron packs every time he visits Iran. He told me that Saffron is a rare-find product, and even if he manages to find a few, the price is costly. Please do keep in touch, and let me know if you liked my suggestion. All the best, Armin
Dear David,

I’m
very
thrilled to hear about your new business. It would be my pleasure to give you
some
recommendations on the merchandise you might consider buying from Iran.

I remember you always liked my traditional rice recipe with the unique spice called “Saffron”. I know that numerous Iranian
people
are residing in Canada. Since this spice is
widely
used
in our cuisine, I’m sure it will always be in high demand.

You might figure out that you can
buy
this product online with a
little
internet browsing;
However
, I do not recommend this method. Online retailers
usually
sell low-quality and over-priced products. Here is an
idea
; if you wish, I can communicate with local farmers here in Iran. This way, by negotiating with the
first
-hand seller, the price would be reasonable, and you might even be able to have your brand printed on the packaging.

My uncle, who
lives
in Canada, tends to
buy
a dozen Saffron packs every time he visits Iran. He
told
me that Saffron is a rare-find product, and even if he manages to find a few, the price is costly.

Please
do
keep
in touch, and
let
me know if you liked my suggestion.

All the best,

Armin
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IELTS letter You have an evening class and your teacher gave you an essay to work on for the weekend. However, you were not able to finish the essay. Write a letter saying the following: - outline the subject of your essay - what happened - why you did not finish it - say what you will do to finish it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
204 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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