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You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left, your English teacher invited you to a dinner. - thank him for the dinner - tell him about your studies - say how his advice helped you

You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left, your English teacher invited you to a dinner. - thank him for the dinner - tell him about your studies - say how his advice helped you gmrL

Dear Mr. Ahmadi, I am writing this email to thank you for the delicious dinner last week. I was so honored to be invited to your house. You cannot imagine how surprised I was when I saw my favorite dishes on the table. You got into much trouble remembering what I liked and preparing them for us. Dinner was garnished perfectly with vegetables, and the taste was beyond my anticipation. There are no words to express how grateful I am for that night. I am taking a business management course at the University of Toronto, one of Canada's most prestigious universities. I will be staying in campus housing for about six months until the course is finished. As you already know, getting to a world-class business school has always been my passion, and I am pleased to seize this opportunity. You have always been more than just an English teacher to me. Not only you taught me how to write great essays error-free, but also you were a mentor helping me find the right path of my life. Without your invaluable guidance and supervision, It would have been impossible for me to get accepted to this University. I feel a deep sense of gratitude to you, and I appreciate everything you have done for me. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you inquire about Canadian universities, and my number is 123456789. Kind regards, Armin Hodaei

Dear Mr. Ahmadi,

I am writing this email to thank you for the delicious dinner ‘last week’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last week
. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 honored to be invited
 to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

You cannot imagine how surprised I was when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 my favorite dishes on the table. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 into much trouble remembering what I liked and preparing them for us. Dinner was garnished
perfectly
 with vegetables, and the taste was beyond my anticipation. There are no words to express how grateful I am for that night.

I am taking a business management course at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
University
 of Toronto, one of Canada's most prestigious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
. I will be staying in campus housing for about six months until the course is finished
. As you already know, getting to a world-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 business school has always been my passion, and I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to seize this opportunity.

You have always been more than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 an English teacher to me. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 you taught me how to write great essays error-free, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 you were a mentor helping me find the right path of my life. Without your invaluable guidance and supervision, It would have been impossible for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
University
. I feel a deep sense of gratitude to you, and I appreciate everything you have done for me.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 do not hesitate to contact me if you inquire about Canadian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withacademyeducational institution
universities
, and my number is 123456789.

Kind regards,

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Hodaei