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Problems with a new computer

Problems with a new computer AnQM

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the Asus 13X computer that I had purchased from your store two days ago. I am a third-year student of the medical university, and because of the high volume of assignments and projects, I need a high-speed and long battery-lasting computer. The consultant in your store has reassured that this model is the most popular for the schoolwork, but, unfortunately, I am not delighted by its quality. Let me explain my concerns; every time when I charge my computer, the screen turns dark every five minutes. Furthermore, the battery lasts for only an hour and a half; however, in a description, you mention that it lasts at least four hours. Also, when more than three documents are open, the computer starts working slow, impacting my efficiency significantly. I would be grateful if you could please replace this computer or give me a refund. I have previously purchased from your store and was delighted by the customer service you have provided, so I hope that we can solve this problem as fast as possible. Let me know if you need any further information, such as my email receipt or computer serial number! Yours faithfully, John Obral

Dear Sir or Madam,

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purchased
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because
 of the high volume of assignments and projects, I need a high-speed and long battery-lasting computer. The consultant in your store has reassured that this model is the most popular for the schoolwork, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
, unfortunately, I am not delighted by its quality.

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Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my concerns; every time when I charge my computer, the screen turns dark every five minutes. Furthermore
, the battery lasts for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 an hour and a half; however
, in a description, you mention that it lasts at least four hours. Also
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starts
 working slow, impacting my efficiency significantly
.

I would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 replace this computer or give me a refund. I have previously This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your store and was delighted
 by the customer service you have provided, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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fast
 as possible.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know if you need any further
 information, such as my email receipt or computer serial number!

Yours faithfully
,

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