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One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your college for that.

One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your college for that. k2En

Dear Bryan, I hope you are doing well; I am writing this letter to you in order to congratulate you for organizing the annual conference event very successfully. As I know you put all your efforts so that this event can achieve its objective for which everyone was going to be gathered there to discuss the new policies for the company, whereas many people from head office were coming to attend this event. I would like to appreciate that you organized very well everything because of which all the event gone very smoothly, whereas everything which was required to be achieved on this conference accomplished very well. Everyone was very happy and liked the arrangements, whereas the venue for this was easily accessible by everyone. It would great if you arrange other events for instance sports events as you have skill of organizing things properly and it would great if use it on different occasions. I hope you will consider and this pursue this talent. Yours Sincerely Ryan

Dear Bryan,

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event
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very
successfully
. As I know you put all your efforts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
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company
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people
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event
.

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very
 well everything This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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very
smoothly
, whereas everything which was required
 to be achieved
 on this conference accomplished This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Everyone was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy and liked the arrangements, whereas the venue for this was easily
 accessible by everyone.

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would great
 if you arrange other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
for instance
 sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 as you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 of organizing things properly
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would great
 if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 occasions. I hope you will consider and The verb 'pursue' is plural. Did you mean: "this pursues"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this pursues
this pursue
 this talent.

Yours Sincerely


Ryan