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You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left, your English teacher invited you to a dinner. - thank him for the dinner - tell him about your studies - say how his advice helped you

You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left, your English teacher invited you to a dinner. - thank him for the dinner - tell him about your studies - say how his advice helped you Jkya
Dear Mr. Johnson, I am writing this letter to let you know that I was unable to finish the essay you gave me as homework. Please allow me to elaborate on exactly why I could not complete this task. This essay was supposed to be about the Solar system. As the essay directed us, I planned to do numerous observations of planets to utilize in this essay. By doing this, my essay would have been well-structured and documented as you mentioned in class. However, contrary to what I have planned, my father had an heart attack last week. Unfortunately, due to this incident I was highly devastated and I had to spend the whole week at the hospital. I am very grateful that he feels much better now and will be discharged tomorrow. I would be very grateful if you consider extending the due date of my homework. I will be doing all the necassary observations and provide a well-developed essay by the end of the week. I look forward to receiving your confirmation. Kind regards, Armin Hodaei
Dear Mr. Johnson,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I was unable to finish the
essay
you gave me as homework.
Please
allow
me to elaborate on exactly why I could not complete this task.

This
essay
was supposed
to be about the Solar system. As the
essay
directed us, I planned to do numerous observations of planets to utilize in this
essay
. By doing this, my
essay
would have been well-structured and documented as you mentioned in
class
.

However
, contrary to what I have planned, my father had
an
heart attack last week. Unfortunately, due to this incident I was
highly
devastated and I had to spend the whole week at the hospital. I am
very
grateful that he feels much better
now
and will
be discharged
tomorrow.

I would be
very
grateful if you consider extending the due date of my homework.
I
will be doing all the
necassary
observations and provide a well-developed
essay
by the
end
of the week.

I
look forward to receiving your confirmation.

Kind regards,

Armin
Hodaei
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IELTS letter You have just arrived in an English speaking country to study a course. Before you left, your English teacher invited you to a dinner. - thank him for the dinner - tell him about your studies - say how his advice helped you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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