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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Dear Sir or Madam, I write in reference to the job advertisement published in Australia Today on 29th April 2020 to look after your six-year-old child. I find children quite interesting, and it fascinates me to be around them. As a university student back in my hometown, I used to teach tuition to the school going kids in my society. I enjoyed the process and would love to take up any available opportunity to be around them. I want to be a teacher and have recently completed my under graduation in education to teach primary school kids. Previously, I was taking care of the son of Mr. and Mrs. Jones, who can be contacted at 12345678 to understand my work. During my stay in Melbourne, I will also be pursuing a certificate course in education from Melbourne University. The classes are usually held in the evening and hence I will continue taking up these classes. I would be grateful if you could consider me for the job. I assure you to be diligent in my work. Yours faithfully, Nuwanda
Dear Sir or Madam,

I write in reference to the job advertisement published in Australia
Today
on 29th April 2020 to look after your six-year-
old
child.

I find children quite interesting, and it fascinates me to be around them. As a university student back in my hometown, I
used
to teach tuition to the school going kids in my society. I enjoyed the process and would
love
to take up any available opportunity to be around them.

I want to be a teacher and have recently completed my under graduation in education to teach primary school kids. Previously, I was taking care of the son of Mr. and Mrs. Jones, who can
be contacted
at 12345678 to understand my work.

During my stay in Melbourne, I will
also
be pursuing a certificate course in education from Melbourne University. The classes are
usually
held in the evening and
hence
I will continue taking up these classes.

I would be grateful if you could consider me for the job. I assure you to be diligent in my work.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nuwanda
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how would spend your free time while you are in Australia.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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