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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of assistant manager as advertised in today’s morning edition of the Times of India. Introducing myself, I have completed my schooling from St Ann’s High School. I had secured first rank at state level in 2008’s higher secondary examination. Thereafter, I have completed my Bachelor’s in business administration from prestigious St Xavier’s College, Mumbai. After completing my graduation, I have been working with KPMG as assistant manager for last two years. My job responsibilities include preparing daily MIS reports, analyzing, and advising our clients on mergers and acquisitions and financial planning. I was also part of their recruitment team and sat on the interview as technical member. My curriculum vitae is attached herewith. One of my main strengths is that I am a team player. Also, I have good communication skills which helps in maintaining a great relationship with client. I believe I will be an asset any company I work with. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, XYZ
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of assistant manager as advertised in
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today
’s morning edition of
If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.
the Times of India
.

Introducing myself, I have completed my schooling from St Ann’s High School. I had secured
first
rank at state level in 2008’s higher secondary examination. Thereafter, I have completed my Bachelor’s in business administration from prestigious St Xavier’s College, Mumbai. After completing my graduation, I have been working with KPMG as assistant manager for last two years. My job responsibilities include preparing daily MIS reports, analyzing, and advising our clients on mergers and acquisitions and financial planning. I was
also
part of their recruitment team and sat on the interview as technical member. My curriculum vitae
is attached
herewith.

One of my main strengths is that I am a team player.
Also
, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
in maintaining a great relationship with client. I believe I will be an asset any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
I work with.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

XYZ

IELTS letter You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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