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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

Dear Paul, I'm writing to thank you for a really enjoyable visit. It was good to see you after so long, and to be able to spend some time with you, talking about old school friends and teachers. Now that I'm back home, I keep thinking about how good it was to be somewhere quiet and peaceful. I have particularly enjoyed our trip to the wildlife sanctuary and appreciated the opportunity to see so many rare birds and animals. It is made me think that I should try to do more to protect them, so I am having a look on the internet to see what sort of organization there are. Perhaps next time we get together you could come and visit me. There are plenty of places we can go and my brother would really like to see you. Let me know when you might be free to come here, and we can fix something up. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Robert
Dear Paul,

I'm writing to thank you for a
really
enjoyable visit. It was
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old
school friends and teachers.

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that I'm back home, I
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keep
thinking about how
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good
it was to be somewhere quiet and peaceful. I have
particularly
enjoyed our trip to the wildlife sanctuary and appreciated the opportunity to
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see
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so
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many
rare birds and animals. It
is made
me
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think
that I should try to do more to protect them,
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so
I am having a look on the internet to
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see
what sort of organization there are.

Perhaps
next
time we
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get
together you could
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come
and visit me. There are
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plenty
of places we can go and my brother would
really
like to
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see
you.
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Let
me know when you might be free to
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come
here, and we can
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fix
something up.

Look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Robert

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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166 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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