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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Give how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • Give how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia MMo6a

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Dileep Jose from the India and currently am in Australia and searching for a job. I am writing this letter in response of your advertisement published in a newspaper couple of days ago, where you asked for a live-in caretaker for your six year old child for six months. I have good experience in taking care about children and I wish to apply for this opportunity. I have two years prior experience in working in a kindergarten, during that period I was taking care about individual child’s as well as small groups of kids. I am the eldest among the siblings and I looked after them when they were young. Besides, my academic results I am fluent in English and that would help me communicate with your children effectively. I would like to explore different parts of Australia during my stay especially the beaches. Additionally, I wish to do start a blog for Indian students who wish to study in Australia and half of my free time I wish to interact with other University students to collect data for my blog. I consider myself a deserving candidate and hope to have a face to face meeting with you to discuss further. Yours faithfully, Dileep Jose

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I consider myself a deserving candidate and hope to have a face to face meeting with you to discuss further
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Yours faithfully
,

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