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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference 151J7
Dear Mr. George, Hope you and your family are doing well. I am Dileep Jose, one of your former students in 2019 BSc Computer Science batch. I am going to apply for a junior application developer job and to fulfill the application requirement I require a reference letter from a known person from the college whose words count. I thought the person to request this letter is you because during the entire duration of the course you taught me the main computer science subjects and additionally, I have completed the projects under you. I am pleased to inform you that the job role I am applying is at Microsoft. This is a dream job for me to work for a reputable company like Microsoft and this job will help me to gain confidence and experience and it will help to progress in my career. I will highly appreciate if you provide me with a reference letter which requires some basic information about me and my studies, projects completed and how can I be a suitable candidate for the junior application developer position in Microsoft. Could you please provide me with the letter as early as possible? Thanks again for everything. Yours Sincerely, Dileep Jose
Dear Mr. George,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I am
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Dileep
Jose, one of your former students in 2019
Consider using a more common abbreviation of this university degree.
BSc
Computer Science batch. I am going to apply for a junior application developer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
and to fulfill the application requirement I require a reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
from a known person from the college whose words count.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
the person to request this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
is you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
during the entire duration of the course you taught me the main computer science subjects and
additionally
, I have completed the projects under you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to inform you that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
role I am applying is at Microsoft. This is a dream
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
for me to work for a reputable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
like Microsoft and this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to gain confidence and experience and it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to progress in my career.

I will
highly
appreciate if you provide me with a reference
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
which requires
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
basic information about me and my studies, projects completed and how can I be a suitable candidate for the junior application developer position in Microsoft. Could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide me with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
letter
as early as possible?

Thanks again for everything.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Dileep
Jose
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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