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What Did You Do This Week

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Well I was doing nothing special this week. But I had lots of plans for this week to do productive things which makes me a little bit better than last week. After all, I am able to do a few things. Since, I have been practicing to gain efficiency on English language, so basically most of my plans are based on developing English. In that context at least, I had tried to fulfil my weekly goal which related to practicing English. I started my week full of energy and courage. Having said that, over the past couple of days I noticed all of my courage was slowly diminishing. I was not afraid to detect that because from the very beginning I greatly knew about my lack of focus. Then I thought it would be incomplete if I gave up and it will be repeated again in the upcoming week. At that moment I didn’t waste any single time and I started to work on my goal. In spite of having lots of obstacles I tried to continue myself. A few days later I noticed I was able to complete most of my tasks from my weekly chart. That gave me lots of mental satisfaction as well as realization of the fact that I keep working onto goal. It's more or less but you should try up. At the end of a few days you will notice you have done sufficient that you could not imagine before you start.
Well I was doing nothing special this
week
.
But
I had lots of plans for this
week
to do productive things which
makes
me a
little bit
better than last
week
.
After all
, I am able to do a few things. Since, I have been practicing to gain efficiency on English language,
so
basically
most of my plans
are based
on developing English. In that context at least, I had tried to fulfil my weekly goal which related to practicing English. I
started
my
week
full of energy and courage. Having said that, over the past couple of days I noticed all of my courage was
slowly
diminishing. I was not afraid to detect that
because
from the
very
beginning I
greatly
knew about my lack of focus. Then I
thought
it would be incomplete if I gave up and it will be
repeated again
in the upcoming
week
. At that moment I didn’t waste any single time and I
started
to work on my goal.
In spite of
having lots of obstacles I tried to continue myself. A few days later I noticed I was able to complete most of my tasks from my weekly chart. That gave me lots of mental satisfaction
as well
as realization of the fact that I
keep
working onto goal. It's more or less
but
you should try up. At the
end
of a few days you will notice you have done sufficient that you could not imagine
before
you
start
.
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IELTS letter What Did You Do This Week

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
248 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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