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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take XGEVY
Dear Mrs. Johnson, I am writing to inform you that i won't be able to continue my evening course on enlish literature, since I am not able to pull out time for the literature class in the evening. I am working as a full time employee as a software developer in Epam Systems Private Limited. Recently i got promoted as Senior Software Engineer and my job responsibilties have increased because of moving into higher position in the organisation. Due to increase in my job responsibilites and even lead a team of six junior developers to complete the project within the proposed dead lines to deliver the project. It quite difficult to make out time for the evening class. I would like to continue the evening class after several months, mostly after completing the project deliverables. Could it be possible to have a recorded sessions of the class, so that I could go through them in my leasure time in the night. Looking forward for your response. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Srujan Aditya
Dear Mrs. Johnson,

I am writing to inform you that
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i
won't be able to continue my evening course on
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enlish
literature, since I am not able to pull out
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time
for the literature
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class
in the evening.

I am working as a full
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time
employee as a software developer in
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Epam
Systems Private Limited. Recently
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i
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got
promoted as Senior Software Engineer and my job
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responsibilties
have increased
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because
of moving into higher position in the
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organisation
.

Due to increase in my job
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responsibilites
and even lead a team of six junior developers to complete the project within the proposed dead lines to deliver the project.
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It
quite difficult to
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make
out
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time
for the evening
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

I would like to continue the evening
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
after several months,
mostly
after completing the project deliverables. Could it be possible to have a recorded
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sessions
of the
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class
,
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so
that I could go through them in my
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leasure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
in the night.

Looking forward for your response.

Thanking you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Srujan
Aditya
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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  American English
9 paragraphs
171 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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