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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card jMA8
Dear Sir, I am writing with regards to student identification card which I lost two days back while traveling. I usually take public transport to reach the university and even checked with the lost goods services department, but could not find it anywhere. The identification card helps me in getting discounts in multiple places, which confirms I am a current university student. However, from past two days I have not been able to recharge my travel card and even facing issues in entering the university. Additionally, to apply for my transcripts and other official documents I would need to attach a copy of the card. I would kindly request you to issue a new card as the due date to apply for the final documents is next week. I have also attached my letter of acceptance, which has all the details, a student card should have. Furthermore, I would be happy to visit your office after the lecture tomorrow to pick the same. I look forward to receiving a response from your end. Yours Faithfully Prachi
Dear Sir,

I am writing
with regards to
student identification
card
which I lost two days back while traveling. I
usually
take public transport to reach the university and even
checked
with the lost
goods
services department,
but
could not find it anywhere.

The identification
card
helps
me in getting discounts in multiple places, which confirms I am a
current
university student.
However
, from past two days I have not been able to recharge my travel
card
and even facing issues in entering the university.
Additionally
, to apply for my transcripts and other official documents I would need to attach a copy of the card.

I would kindly request you to issue a new
card
as the due date to apply for the final documents is
next
week. I have
also
attached my letter of acceptance, which has all the
details
, a student
card
should have.
Furthermore
, I would be happy to visit your office after the lecture tomorrow to pick the same.

I look forward to receiving a response from your
end
.

Yours
Faithfully


Prachi
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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