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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________ bpkW
Dear Dipika and Sunaina, Thank you so much for the Christmas photos you guys sent me. It refreshed my memories of time spent there with you, not to forget the cute puppies. It has only been a month and I already cannot wait for the next time we are together for the holidays. I am sorry for not being able to write earlier. I had been super busy at work as my colleague just had to take a maternity leave and the work pressure has fallen on my shoulders. Anyway, I would like to invite you guys to my place for the summer. We could all use some time to relax and go out to beach for sun baths. There is going to be a week-long summer camp in my city that I could sign us all up for. I am sure you guys will love it. Hey! do not forget to bring the pups, I miss them so much. I cannot wait to hear from you guys. Thank you for the photos again which are already up on my wall. Best Regards, Kajal Chagti
Dear
Dipika
and
Sunaina
,

Thank you
so
much for the Christmas photos you
guys
sent
me. It refreshed my memories of time spent there with you, not to forget the cute puppies. It has
only
been a month and I already cannot wait for the
next
time we are together for the holidays.

I am sorry for not being able to write earlier. I had been super busy at work as my colleague
just
had to take a maternity
leave
and the work pressure has fallen on my shoulders. Anyway, I would like to invite you
guys
to my place for the summer.

We could all
use
some
time to relax and go out to beach for sun baths. There is going to be a week-long summer camp in my city that I could
sign
us all up for. I am sure you
guys
will
love
it.

Hey!
do
not forget to bring the pups, I miss them
so
much. I cannot wait to hear from you
guys
. Thank you for the photos again which are already up on my wall.

Best Regards,

Kajal
Chagti
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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