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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take g5Aqd
Dear Mr Singh, I am a student of Microsoft office training course in your institution. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am unable to attend the course on 15th April onwards. I hope you would allow me to attend the course from 1st June in next batch. I am working in a telecom company as an assistant researcher. Due to some recently assigned project, my office want more of my time. Moreover, there are some deadlines ahead which I have to meet. Also I am going to Australia for some official purpose at the beginning of May. I have to work few extra hours each day. So, all these new responsibilities force to pause my course for time being. However, I am willing to continue my course as it is beneficial for my future. Therefore, I humbly request to attend my course from next batch. This would be helpful for me to manage my office work on one hand and my course on other hand. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Navneet Kaur
Dear Mr Singh,

I am a student of
Did you mean the proper noun "Microsoft Office" (= Microsoft product)?
Microsoft office
training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
in your institution. I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that I am unable to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on 15th April onwards.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you would
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allow
me to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from 1st June in
next
batch.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am working in a telecom
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as an assistant researcher. Due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
recently assigned project, my office want more of my time.
Moreover
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
deadlines ahead which I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I am going to Australia for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
official purpose at the beginning of May. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
work few extra hours each day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, all these new responsibilities force to pause my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
for time being.
However
, I am willing to continue my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as it is beneficial for my future.

Therefore
, I
humbly
request to attend my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from
next
batch. This would be helpful for me to manage my office work on one hand and my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on other hand.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Navneet
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Kaur
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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181 words
6.0
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