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A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination xma86
Dear John, Hope your are keeping well and kids are fine. I glad to know that you are planning to enjoy few days with your family at a holiday spot in coming month. As you asked me any recommendation then I definitely like to suggest you the heaven on the earth where you could spend unforgettable quality time with your family. The name of the country is Switzerland where I have visited last year for tow weeks. I still remember my that enjoyable experience. I reserved the family package through a travel agency and they arranged our accommodation in a hotel which was located in the downtown. You can visit the famous museum, science city and Swiss chocolate factory through affordable public transportation. For travelling to natural picturesque such as lake, mountains and national park tour buses are provided by the travel agencies. The overall experience was perfect for us. Although everything was include in the family package such as Pickup and drop facility, hotel, meals and tour guide, the cost of visiting to this destination is little high than other destinations. However, you will get back the value of your money once you see the stunning views over there. I would really recommend you to go and enjoy your holidays to this beautiful place. Best wishes, David
Dear John,

Hope your are keeping well and kids are fine.
Did you mean "I am"?
I
glad to know that you are planning to enjoy few days with your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
at a holiday spot in coming month.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you asked me any recommendation then I definitely like to suggest you the heaven on the earth where you could spend unforgettable quality time with your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
. The name of the country is Switzerland where I have visited last year for tow weeks. I
still
remember my that enjoyable experience.

I reserved the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
package through a travel
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
agency and
they arranged our accommodation in a hotel which
was located
in the downtown. You can visit the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
museum, science city and Swiss chocolate factory through affordable public transportation. For travelling to natural picturesque such as lake, mountains and national park tour buses
are provided
by the travel agencies.

The
overall
experience was perfect for us. Although everything was
Consider using a past participle here: "included".
include
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
package such as Pickup and drop facility, hotel, meals and tour guide, the cost of visiting to this destination is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
Use "higher" to make a comparison with this adjective.
high
than other destinations.
However
, you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back the value of your money once you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the stunning views over there.

I would
really
recommend you to go and enjoy your holidays to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
place.

Best wishes, David
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited Describe where you stayed and what you can do there Provide one negative aspect about the destination

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217 words
6.0
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