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You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to share my interest about an advertisement in the newspaper for a job in the city post office during my holidays. I am Srikanth Rayapureddy from Andhra Pradesh, currently working as a Mechanical Engineer in an automotive manufacturing company. After graduating with a master’s degree in Industrial & Systems Engineering from Illinois University, I started working with Caterpillar, Inc based on Chicago, US. I create prototypes of heavy mechanical components using 3D and 2D design softwares. I am excited to learn that my current and past work experiences align with the job requirements. Having worked for more than 3 years in various departments in automotive industry, I am confident about my capabilities and deliverables. Additionally, I am equipped with professional certifications which enhances my chances to work on abroad projects too. The most interesting point to consider this job post is I could work in the same city without relocating to another city. After successful completion of interviews, I can start immediately. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Srikanth Rayapureddy
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to share my interest about an advertisement in the newspaper for a job in the city post office during my holidays.

I am
Srikanth
Rayapureddy
from Andhra Pradesh,
currently
working as a Mechanical Engineer in an automotive manufacturing
company
. After graduating with a master’s degree in Industrial & Systems Engineering from Illinois University, I
started
working with Caterpillar, Inc based on Chicago, US. I create prototypes of heavy mechanical components using 3D and 2D design
softwares
.

I
am excited
to learn that my
current
and past work experiences align with the job requirements. Having worked for more than 3 years in various departments in automotive industry, I am confident about my capabilities and deliverables.
Additionally
, I
am equipped
with professional certifications which enhances my chances to work on abroad projects too.

The most interesting point to consider this job post is I could work in the same city without relocating to another city. After successful completion of interviews, I can
start
immediately.

Looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Srikanth
Rayapureddy
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

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  American English
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179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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