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Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell: -what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff -how you feel about it -what suggestions you have.

Dear Mr. Ben, Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter to appraise the difficulty facing by the staff for having a meal, and I urge you to make a certain change. In the last weekly meeting, all the employees of the Dubai office were complaining about the non-availability of a pantry room. To have lunch, they need to travel to the nearest restaurant, which is ten minutes away from our premises. By this, workers not only losing time but also need to buy any item to occupy a table in the cafe. Unfortunately, I felt embrace after hearing the complaint because of being an international organization. Therefore, it will impact the image of the firm in the market. I assured the staff that the management will do something to solve this trouble. I have a solution for this predicament. If we lease a small area beside our office, the cafeteria will be constructed over there with all amenities. I am anticipating that you would find my solution beneficial for this situation and promptly approve the request for an extension. Yours sincerely, Syed Masood. 185 Words
Dear Mr. Ben,

Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter to appraise the difficulty facing by the staff for having a meal, and I urge you to
make
a certain
change
.

In the last weekly meeting, all the employees of the Dubai office were complaining about the non-availability of a pantry room. To have lunch, they need to travel to the nearest restaurant, which is ten minutes away from our premises. By this, workers not
only
losing time
but
also
need to
buy
any item to occupy a table in the
cafe
. Unfortunately, I felt embrace after hearing the complaint
because
of being an international organization.
Therefore
, it will impact the image of the firm in the market. I assured the staff that the management will do something to solve this trouble.

I have a solution for this predicament. If we lease a
small
area beside our office, the cafeteria will
be constructed
over there with all amenities.

I am anticipating that you would find my solution beneficial for this situation and
promptly
approve the request for an extension.

Yours
sincerely
,

Syed
Masood
.

185 Words
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell: -what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff -how you feel about it -what suggestions you have.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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