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Write a letter to the airport flight manager about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport. Explain - what was the accident - what was the result of missing the flight - what you want them to Do.

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you regarding missing trip to London, flight no. b230 on Tuesday 2nd October. Last Tuesday, 2nd of October, I was arrived at airport parking lot on a time but when I left the parking lot and entered in the main hallway, my leg was slipped. I tried to stand but not able to did that someone helped to lift me up. on the very next moment, I found that I had scratch with little blood on the arm. Then, they called for first aid and put the bandage on it. After that, I was waiting in the lot, my ankle had swealing and hard to walk for few yards. So, I was not able to departure. I had a meeting in London but it was canceled due to I did not make it. I called my colleagues and told them about the predicament. Now, I have meeting next week on 14th October. Could you please transfer my ticket to next week. I want to say sorry to you for inconvenience. Hope you will make some arrangement and I look forward to hearing from you! Yours faithfully, Gurinder
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you regarding missing trip to London, flight no. b230 on Tuesday 2nd October.

Last Tuesday, 2nd of October, I
was arrived
at airport parking lot on a time
but
when I
left
the parking lot and
entered in the main
hallway, my leg
was slipped
. I tried to stand
but
not able to did that someone
helped
to lift me up. on the
very
next
moment, I found that I had scratch with
little
blood on the arm. Then, they called for
first
aid and put the bandage on it. After that, I was waiting in the lot, my ankle had
swealing
and
hard
to walk for few yards.
So
, I was not able to departure.

I had a meeting in London
but
it
was canceled
due to I did not
make
it. I called my colleagues and
told
them about the predicament.
Now
, I have meeting
next
week on 14th October. Could you
please
transfer my ticket to
next
week. I want to say sorry to you for inconvenience.

Hope you will
make
some
arrangement and I look forward to hearing from you!

Yours
faithfully
,

Gurinder
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the airport flight manager about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport. Explain - what was the accident - what was the result of missing the flight - what you want them to Do.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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