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Letter to a friend about his performance in recent function

Dear Raju, Hope you're in the pink of health and best of spirits. As discussed in the past on the phone I guaranteed you that I can attend your concert even I am engaged at work, as promised I attended the concert and the performance which you had done be impressive. I realize that how hard you are rehearsing this for quite a while. I appreciate you from my bottom of my heart, furthermore, my parents are equally satisfied with your performance. Since childhood, you have known I have loved playing the piano and guitar. Did you recollect that in our school days we used to participate in several competitions in our school, and we have won many prizes for it? Due to busy at work, I was incapable to concentrate on music. I genuinely want to encourage you from my end to grow in your career, and also I will refer you to some of my friends who are in an excellent position so that they can provide you a chance to prove yourself. hopefully, we will meet soon. Take care Yours truly, Manidhar.
Dear
Raju
,

Hope you're in the pink of health and best of spirits. As discussed in the past on the phone I guaranteed you that I can attend your concert even I
am engaged
at work, as promised I attended the concert and the performance which you had done be impressive. I realize that how
hard
you are rehearsing this for quite a while.

I appreciate you from my bottom of my heart,
furthermore
, my parents are
equally
satisfied with your performance.

Since childhood, you have known I have
loved
playing the piano and guitar. Did you recollect that in our school days we
used
to participate in several competitions in our school, and we have won
many
prizes for it? Due to busy at work, I was incapable to concentrate on music.

I
genuinely
want to encourage you from my
end
to grow in your career, and
also
I will refer you to
some
of my friends who are in an excellent position
so
that they can provide you a chance to prove yourself.

hopefully
, we will
meet
soon
.

Take care

Yours
truly
,

Manidhar
.
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IELTS letter Letter to a friend about his performance in recent function

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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