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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two chridren your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple, in your letter - explain why you think you would be suitable for the job - say what else you could do for the family - give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two chridren your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple, in your letter - explain why you think you would be suitable for the job - say what else you could do for the family - give your reasons for wanting the job LME3

Dear Micheal, I hope you are doing well. I saw a posting in an internet job board that you and your wife are looking for someone who can teach your kids to learn Korean. I am interested to apply for the job. I have lived 15 years in South Korea, and that is about my whole childhood, and have a complete command over the Korean language with different dialects. You will be glad to know that I also have taught Korean to primary class children in a public school here in Australia for several years, and it makes me perfect for the job. Kids make me happy and I do not only like to teach them but I am wonderful with kids. Hence if it is ever required after classes, I can baby sit your children without any issues and keep them well-organized. The public school, I had been teaching in, has been closed due to some reasons and I have been out of job since. I am very keen for this opportunity to meet my both ends. I look forward to hear back from you soon. Yours sincerely. Jim

Dear Micheal,

I hope you are doing well.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a posting in an internet job board that you and your wife are looking for someone who can teach your kids to learn Korean. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am interested
 to apply for the job.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 15 years in South Korea, and that is
 about my whole childhood, and have a complete command over the Korean language with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 dialects. You will be glad to know that I also
 have taught Korean to primary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 children in a public school here in Australia for several years, and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me perfect for the job.

Kids This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me happy and I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 like to teach them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am wonderful with kids. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 if it is ever required after classes, I can baby sit your children without any issues and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them well-organized.

The public school, I had been teaching in, has been closed
 due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons and I have been out of job since. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 keen for this opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 my both ends.

I look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 back from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
.

Jim