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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job pR5G3
Dear Mr and Mrs Trump, I am writing you this letter in reference for you advertisement which I came across in daily newspaper. The post in which you are looking for some one to teach Spanish language to your children. I guess I would fit best for this job and will also be excited to teach children. Firstly, I am a Spanish native speaker and I have also completed my diploma in Spanish language personally. Past 2 years I have worked in Xavis school of Australia as Spanish teacher. I have a good command on Spanish and English language, so will be pretty easy to educate them with using both the language skills. Although, I am a good tutor, I am also a good artist. I can play piano for your family during festivals and celebration. As this job will earn me some extra money which I can use for my further studies. Hoping to hear positive response from your end. Thank you in advance. Your sincerely, John April
Dear Mr and Mrs Trump,

I am writing you this letter in reference for
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you advertisement
which I came across in daily newspaper. The post in which you are looking for
Did you mean "someone"?
some one
to teach Spanish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
to your children. I guess I would fit best for this job and will
also
be excited
to teach children.

Firstly
, I am a Spanish native speaker and I have
also
completed my diploma in Spanish
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language
personally
. Past 2 years I have worked in
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Xavis
school of Australia as Spanish teacher. I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
command on Spanish and English
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language
,
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so
will be pretty easy to educate them with using both the
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language
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skills
.

Although, I am a
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good
tutor, I am
also
a
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good
artist. I can play piano for your family during festivals and celebration. As this job will earn me
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some
extra money which I can
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use
for my
further
studies.

Hoping to hear
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positive
response from your
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end
. Thank you in advance.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

John April

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job

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168 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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