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You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position. e5ejJ
To whom it may concern, I am writing to express my interest in the position of Lead Software Engineer that was advertised in The Times newspaper on 24/09/2017. My education consists of a Bachelor’s Degree with first class honours in Computer Science from the University of Manchester, as well as a Master’s Degree in Applied Software Engineering from the University of Barcelona, where I assisted in the development of an artificial intelligence that has the ability to recognise individual personality traits in humans with great accuracy. Further to this, I have since worked for Intel Corporation as a Senior Engineer for over eight years. My main responsibilities centred around the management of a team of fifteen developers whose job it was to provide machine code solutions to processing problems. I believe it is this well-developed problem solving ability which makes me a suitable candidate for a leadership position at your esteemed company. Finally, I have been compelled to participate in the technology sector since I was a teenager, and so my enthusiasm for the industry is considerable. Please find my CV attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview. Yours faithfully, Nicola Sturgeon
To whom it may concern,

I am writing to express my interest in the position of Lead Software Engineer that
was advertised
in The Times newspaper on 24/09/2017.

My education consists of a Bachelor’s Degree with
first
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class
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honours
in Computer Science from the University of Manchester,
as well
as a Master’s Degree in Applied Software Engineering from the University of Barcelona, where I assisted in the development of
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "artificial intelligence".
an artificial intelligence
that has the ability to
Possible spelling mistake. 'recognise' is British English.
recognise
individual personality traits in humans with great accuracy.

Further
to this, I have since worked for Intel Corporation as a Senior Engineer for over eight years. My main responsibilities
Possible spelling mistake. 'centred' is British English.
centred
around the management of a team of fifteen developers whose job it was to provide machine code solutions to processing problems. I believe it is this well-developed problem solving ability which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me a suitable candidate for a leadership position at your esteemed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Finally
, I have
been compelled
to participate in the technology sector since I was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenager
, and
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so
my enthusiasm for the industry is considerable.

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Please
find my CV attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity
further
at interview.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nicola Sturgeon
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: 1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired 2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job 3. Your past experience in a similar position.

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6.0
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