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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Sir/Ma'am, Greetings of the day! I am Rajwinder Kaur, resident of Kingswood drive, Australia. Yesterday, I was reading newspaper, out of the blue, I saw an advertisement from your side that you are looking for tutor who can teach Punjabi to your 2 kids for 12 months. Through this letter, I would like to tell you that I am quite interested in this work. As a matter of fact, I consider myself best for this job because I have not only a good communication command on this language, but also, I have two years experience of a teacher in kindergarten which explored my ability to guide juveniles in an effective way. Having said that, along with teaching language, I can also teach them general manners which are quite required for them to cope with society in future. Furthermore, I will definitely generate an interest in extra-curricular activities. I would like to do this job as I am international student and I really need a money in order to fulfil my basic needs. Also, I am living alone and with children I can enjoy, and it will break my monotony and I will feel stressless. I am waiting your response. Thank You. Yours faithfully, Rajwinder Kaur
Dear Sir/Ma'am,

Greetings of the day! I am
Rajwinder
Kaur
, resident of
Kingswood
drive, Australia. Yesterday, I was reading newspaper, out of the blue, I
saw
an advertisement from your side that you are looking for tutor who can teach Punjabi to your 2 kids for 12 months. Through this letter, I would like to
tell
you that I am quite interested in this work.

As a matter of fact, I consider myself best for this job
because
I have not
only
a
good
communication command on this language,
but
also
, I have two years experience of a teacher in kindergarten which explored my ability to guide juveniles
in an effective way
. Having said that, along with teaching language, I can
also
teach them general manners which are quite required for them to cope with society
in future
.
Furthermore
, I will definitely generate an interest in extra-curricular activities.

I would like to do this job as I
am international
student and I
really
need
a money
in order to fulfil my basic needs.
Also
, I am living alone and with children I can enjoy, and it will break my monotony and I will feel
stressless
. I am waiting your response. Thank You.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rajwinder
Kaur
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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