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Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mr. Anil, I would like to introduce myself as I am a new neighbor to you, My name is Shubham Sharma and I am from Chandigarh and currently working in this city at the Indian School of Business as a designer. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am having a party at my house with my office friends, I am worried that the noise may disturb you so I thought of a better way to solve this and I hope you may like it. I wanted you all to be my guest at the party held at my house tomorrow at 6 pm. You would be happy to know that Bollywood singer Mr. Badshah is also joining us at the party and I do believe your children might enjoy him singing. There are several more plans for the couples e. g. dancing, Karaoke, drinks and many more. I Invite the whole family to my residence for the party and we can get to know each other as we are going to be good neighbors. Thank you, Shubham Sharma
Dear Mr. Anil,

I would like to introduce myself as I am a new neighbor to you, My name is Shubham
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Sharma and
I am from Chandigarh and
currently
working in this city at the Indian School of Business as a designer. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am having a
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party
at my
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house
with my office friends, I
am worried
that the noise may disturb you
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so
I
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thought
of a better way to solve this and I hope you may like it.
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I
wanted you all to be my guest at the
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party
held at my
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house
tomorrow at 6 pm. You would be happy to know that Bollywood singer Mr.
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Badshah
is
also
joining us at the
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party
and I do believe your children might enjoy him singing. There are several more plans for the couples
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e. g.
dancing, Karaoke, drinks and
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many
more. I Invite the whole family to my residence for the
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party and
we can
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get
to know each other as we are going to be
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good
neighbors.

Thank you,

Shubham Sharma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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