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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mary, Hope you're doing well. I am your new neighbour as I have just moved into a new home in this building, a day before yesterday. We haven't met personally but would like to invite you in my husband's birthday party on coming Sunday. We will not only get a chance to meet you personally but also can spend some good time together. I arranged a birthday party for my better half at my home. I planned to have music system but I'm worried about the noise that may disturb you as the party will begin at 8 pm and will continue till midnight. I hope you understand that it's just a matter of one night. I wanted to invite you personally but I'm stuck in so many things that I can't spare some time to come at your place. So, I'm writing this letter to you. Please do come, we will have an amazing time together. Best Regards, Sakshi
Dear Mary,

Hope you're doing well. I am your new
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would like to invite you in my husband's birthday party on coming Sunday. We will not
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meet
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can spend
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time together.

I arranged a birthday party for my better half at my home. I planned to have music system
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I'm worried about the noise that may disturb you as the party will
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at 8 pm and will continue till midnight.
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hope you understand that it's
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a matter of one night.

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wanted to invite you
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things that I can't spare
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time to
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come
at your place.
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, I'm writing this letter to you.
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do
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come
, we will have an amazing time together.

Best Regards,

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Sakshi
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IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.