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There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

Dear Mr. smith, I am abhishek verma, one of the employees in management department. I am wrinting this letter in regards to bring into your notice about the copmlaints being submitted for reception area. The first and formost dissatisfaction of the visitors is the reciption service. Another problem I have seen is very less visiting hours. There are losts of disputes regading appionytment times too. In my opinoin reception area is the heart of any work setting. Reception and its services are the first impression of any company. So by keeping its value in my mind i would like to suggest some improvement ideas at reciption area. Hiring extra staff could help in proiving better customer services. To overcome the confusion I can be suggested to make appointments over phone or online. Visitor hours can also be raised. I hope these suggestion swill help you to take furture decissions for the improvement of reception area. Yours faithfully Abhishek
Dear Mr. smith,

I am
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abhishek
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verma
, one of the employees in management department. I am
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wrinting
this letter
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in regards to
bring into your notice about the
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copmlaints
being submitted
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
area. The
first
and
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formost
dissatisfaction of the visitors is the
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reciption
service. Another problem I have
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seen
is
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very
less visiting hours. There are
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losts
of disputes
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regading
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appionytment
times too.

In my
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opinoin
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reception
area is the heart of any work setting.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Reception
and its services are the
first
impression of any
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company
.
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So
by keeping its value in my mind
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i
would like to suggest
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some
improvement
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ideas
at
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reciption
area.

Hiring extra staff could
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help
in
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proiving
better customer services. To overcome the confusion I can
be suggested
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
appointments over phone or online. Visitor hours can
also
be raised
.

I hope these suggestion swill
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help
you to take
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furture
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decissions
for the improvement of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reception
area.

Yours
faithfully


Abhishek

IELTS letter There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

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  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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