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A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to the feedback of your sponsorship which will provide in the near future to the cricket team or open-air concerts. Our area cricket team had won in several national tournaments and your sponsorship will give them a major motivational factor to perform better and they can play with the good strength in future as well it is also beneficial for your company if the winning had kits mentioned with your company tag. For instance, they can print your company tags on their T-shirts, trousers, and bats that way they can also influence the viewer about the company which is sponsoring them. On the other hand, if you sponsor the concerts it will also help in the promotions of your company, For instance, the singers can have your company banner posted on the back of the stage and on the tickets which they distribute and your company employees can also get a chance to enjoy with their families in the concerts. In my opinion, rather than spending the complete amount on only one side, you can distribute the amount equally among these and that will help better in the promotion and you can have a viewership of several peoples. Hope you will consider my request Regard,
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter
with regards to
the feedback of your sponsorship which will provide in the near future to the cricket team or open-air concerts. Our area cricket team had won in several national tournaments and your sponsorship will give them a major motivational factor to perform
better and
they can play with the
good
strength in future
as well
it is
also
beneficial for your
company
if the winning had kits mentioned with your
company
tag.
For instance
, they can print your
company
tags on their T-shirts, trousers, and bats that way they can
also
influence the viewer about the
company
which is sponsoring them.

On the other hand
, if you sponsor the concerts it will
also
help
in the promotions of your
company
,
For instance
, the singers can have your
company
banner posted on the back of the stage and on the tickets which they distribute and your
company
employees can
also
get
a chance to enjoy with their families in the concerts.

In my opinion,
rather
than spending the complete amount on
only
one side, you can distribute the amount
equally
among these and that will
help
better in the promotion and you can have a viewership of several peoples.

Hope you will consider my request

Regard,
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IELTS letter A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.

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