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Dear sir, I am writting to complain about your online shopping centre. When i ordered online product and delivery was not well. Last week, i ordered online mobile in amzon. Co. Site which quality was good and range are also suitable for me. When the delivery came it some accessories is missing like charger, headphones etc. Which i was shocked and call for the customer centre but they not any answer me. I personally experience that delivery is the main part of the shopping Without this process they are not completed. I request you please replace the product and new one send me same address with proper accessories. I hope this matter will be resolved as soon as possible. Your sincere Harry
Dear sir, I am
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writting
to complain about your online shopping
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centre
. When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
ordered online product and delivery was not well. Last week,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
ordered online mobile in
Possible spelling mistake found.
amzon
. Co. Site which quality was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and range are
also
suitable for me. When the delivery came it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
accessories is missing like charger, headphones etc. Which
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was shocked
and call for the customer centre
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
they not any answer me. I
personally
experience that delivery is the main part of the shopping Without this process they are not completed. I request you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
replace the product and new one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me same address with proper accessories.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope this matter will
be resolved
as
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soon
as possible. Your sincere
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Harry
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IELTS letter you recently ordered something online when the delivery came it was not complete write a letter for

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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