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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. In your letter Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year Write a letter to the couple. In your letter Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job X23q

Dear Jim and Pam, I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement i saw in the newspaper about teaching my native language to your two children for a year. First of all, i will take this opportunity to introduce myself, i am a native language professor and i have a rich experience of teaching the native langugae in a state owned University. I am confident that my experience in teaching will help your children become fluent in my native language because of many reasons, one of which is my experience with teaching students on exchange program from different countries. I have helped students improve their speaking, reading and writing skills in my language. I have deep affinity with the Australian culture as my ancestors belong to Canberra and i have lived few years of my life in Canberra, I truly want the Aussie community be able to break all barriers in education sector. Therefore, i can refer your children to the University on full paid scholorships depending upon their talent and glitch for the field. This offer can be a huge hit for your family. Due to Covid, there is distant learning, Hence i have ample time daily which i feel can be utilised productively if i teach more students online. This is the reason why i am writing to you for this job. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards Sarah

Dear Jim and Pam,

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Regards

Sarah