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You have seen an advertisement for part time job for three months over the Summer write a letter to a manager.

You have seen an advertisement for part time job for three months over the Summer write a letter to a manager. 7prOy
Dear Sir or Madam, In applying for the position of recetionist, I offer my qualification, which I believe will meet your exacting requirements. I have seen an advert for part time work in your hotel during three months in the Summer. I am a graduate of Andijan state university, and have recently completed master degree in Tashkent university of foreign languages. I can talk four languages; russian, english uzbek and arabic. I have been working in restaurant for five years. Apart from working there I teach english to children who living near my house. I am good at keeping in touch with people. I do like making conversation alot. I can control myself any time. I am a bit familiar with this job. Could you please tell me? What needs should I do to get this job? I would like certainly be interested in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an interview for your convenience I enclose my resume. I lokk forward to hearing from you and wish you a happy new year. Regards, Tursunova Gulnigor
Dear Sir or Madam, In applying for the position of
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recetionist
, I offer my qualification, which I believe will
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meet
your exacting requirements. I have
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seen
an advert for
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part time
work in your hotel during three months in the Summer. I am a graduate of
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Andijan
state university, and have recently completed master degree in Tashkent university of foreign languages.
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I
can talk four languages;
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russian
,
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english
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uzbek
and
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arabic
.
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I
have been working in restaurant for five years. Apart from working there I teach
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english
to children who living near my
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house
. I am
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good
at keeping in touch with
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people
. I do like making conversation
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alot
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can control myself any time.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am a bit familiar with this job. Could you
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please
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tell
me? What needs should I do to
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get
this job? I would like
certainly
be interested
in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an interview for your convenience I enclose my resume. I
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lokk
forward to hearing from you and wish you a happy new year. Regards,
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Tursunova
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Gulnigor
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for part time job for three months over the Summer write a letter to a manager.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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