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About my self and what I do

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Hello, my name is Al Aminur Rahman Nuhash. I'm a college student. I recently attended Higher Secondary School exams. My exams were pretty good and I expect to get letter marks. So now exams are over. I'm not studying right now. I watch movies, play games, talk with friends and all that. I'm planning to get admitted in the University admission coaching. I need University admission coaching because of corona situation. In COVID-19 lockdown many of us didn't have the chance to attend classes. So we have thrown away from the studies.
Hello, my name is Al
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Aminur
Rahman
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Nuhash
. I'm a college student. I recently attended Higher Secondary School exams. My exams were pretty
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good
and I
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expect
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get
letter marks.
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So
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now
exams are over. I'm not studying right
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now
. I
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watch
movies, play games, talk with friends and all that.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm planning to
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get
admitted in the University admission coaching.

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I
need University admission coaching
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because
of corona situation. In COVID-19 lockdown
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many
of us didn't have the chance to attend classes.
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So
we have thrown away from the studies.
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IELTS letter About my self and what I do

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
92 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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