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College Accommodation Complaint

College Accommodation Complaint kjeLW

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to seek help regarding difficulties with my current accomodation. I am a second year student staying at room number 237, and I am currently sharing the room with a fresher. First of all, I am having difficulty sleeping at night due to my roommate's noise. The reason is beacuase he always plays computer games past midnight. Due to this, I am unable to have sound rest at night peacefully. Additionally, he has so many personal belongings that he cannot fit into his wardrobe. Eventually, he has left his luggages open on the floor and I am having a hard time, even moving around in the room. Before I write this letter, I had already approached him about those issues but he was adamant that he had not invaded my personal space. So, I would like to seek your help to move me or him into another room. I would not be able to study peacefully after classes unless I can have a tidy and quiet environment in my room. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your sincerely, Aung Thu Moe

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to seek This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 regarding difficulties with my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
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accomodation
. I am a second year student staying at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 number 237, and I am currently
 sharing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with a fresher.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I am having difficulty sleeping at night due to my roommate's noise. The reason is Possible spelling mistake found.because
beacuase
 he always plays computer games past midnight. Due to this, I am unable to have sound rest at night peacefully
. Additionally
, he has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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many
 personal belongings that he cannot fit into his wardrobe. Eventually
, he has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 his Possible spelling mistake found.luggage
luggages
 open on the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).floor, and
floor and
 I am having a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 time, even moving around in the room.

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Before
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but
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So
, I would like to seek your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 me or him into another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I would not be able to study peacefully
 after classes unless I can have a tidy and quiet environment in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

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Aung
 Thu Moe