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You Have Seen An Advertisement For A Weekend Job As A Local Tour Guide Showing Visitors Around Your City

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jen, I am a college student and I've graduated for a month and now I am having a long rest near three months. Due to that, I decide to apply to your job to try myself at tourist job. Besides, if I can do this job, it will be earned extra money for my life. I have worked at the restaurant for two years when I was in the college and I merely founded that I am interested in talking with everyone and going to a number of destinations to explore more about our world. Also, I am keen on local historic spots and beautiful destinations. Consequently, I think my skill can appropriate for this job. At the university, I always got high grades for my projects and most of my projects were attracted audience. I do not have any phobia of performance due to the fact I always wanted to get high mark. That’s why for me it will not be hard to cope with this job. I'm looking forward for your mail. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Jen, I am a college student and I've graduated for a month and
now
I am having a long rest near three months. Due to that, I decide to apply to your job to try myself at tourist job.
Besides
, if I can do this job, it will
be earned
extra money for my life.

I have worked at the restaurant for two years when I was in the college and I
merely
founded that I
am interested
in talking with everyone and going to a number of destinations to explore more about our world.
Also
, I am keen on local historic spots and
beautiful
destinations.
Consequently
, I
think
my
skill
can appropriate for this job.

At the university, I always
got
high grades for my projects and most of my projects
were attracted
audience. I do not have any phobia of performance due to the fact I always wanted to
get
high mark. That’s why for me it will not be
hard
to cope with this job.

I'm looking forward for your mail.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You Have Seen An Advertisement For A Weekend Job As A Local Tour Guide Showing Visitors Around Your City

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  American English
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183 words
7.0
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