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My name is Tran Thanh Van, I have graduated recently from the School of Law – Vietnam National University in Hanoi

My name is Tran Thanh Van, I have graduated recently from the School of Law – Vietnam National University in Hanoi B7YW6
Dear TGVN, My name is Tran Thanh Van, I have graduated recently from the School of Law – Vietnam National University in Hanoi. I expect to look for a job that I can learn and contribute to. Realized that TGVN is a good environment and has a specialty in IP law, I believe that my IP knowledge and my hard-working attitude would contribute to the company’s development. At present, I just have the main knowledge with trademark but I can study and will try my best to finish my task in the related aspect. I wonder whether the company needs a member of support staff. If you feel that my abilities and experience make me suitable for your environment, I would be very happy to meet with you for an interview. I am looking forward to receiving information from the company.
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My name is Tran Thanh Van, I have graduated recently from the School of Law
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Vietnam National University in Hanoi.

I
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to look for a job that I can learn and contribute to. Realized that
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is a
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good
environment and has a specialty in IP law, I believe that my IP knowledge and my
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hard
-working attitude would contribute to the
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company
’s development. At present, I
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just
have the main knowledge with trademark
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but
I can study and will try my best to finish my task in the related aspect. I wonder whether the
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company
needs a member of support staff.

If you feel that my abilities and experience
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me suitable for your environment, I would be
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very
happy to
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meet
with you for an interview.

I am looking forward to receiving information from the
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company
.
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IELTS letter My name is Tran Thanh Van, I have graduated recently from the School of Law – Vietnam National University in Hanoi

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141 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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